My puppy is a Cockapoo,
he searches and experiments with everything new,
My puppy is a fluffy ball,
he curls up next to me round and small,
My puppy is a lover of toys,
when I throw them he leaps for joy,
My puppy is the centre of attention,
although that's something I shouldn't mention,
I know I must be patient because without him my life would be vacant.
I chose to do a children's rhyme about a puppy in first person narrative, in this case being the child's perspective. I did this in order for the target audience( children) to be to find it more relatable and be able to read and understand the rhyme. Furthermore I used concrete nouns throughout the poem such as, ball and puppy. another reason I used this minimalistic language was so the whole aim of the children's poem was achieved. The aim being that, children can understand the poem and therefore enjoy reading it.
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